写作语料库
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新人教版八年级下册 Unit 5
作文专用语料库
分类 | 英文短语 / 单词 |
1. 天气与自然 | rainstorm，storm，rain heavily / pour，strong wind，thunder，lightning，cloudy / rainy / windy，terrible，sudden |
2. 日常突发（重点） | alarm，alarm clock，go off，wake up，wake up late ，rush to…，go wrong，by the time…，all of a sudden ，as a result，out of breath |
3. 感受与状态 | cold and wet，worried，unlucky，lucky ，scared，nervous，relaxed |
4. 意外事件 | landslide，be late，miss the bus，break my umbrella ，can’t go to school，cancel the test |
二、高频短语（必背）
wake up late 起晚
rush to the bus stop 冲向公交站
wait for the bus 等公交车
review notes 复习笔记
begin to pour 开始下大雨
rain heavily 雨下得很大
blow strongly 风刮得很大
be late for class 上课迟到
be all wet 全身湿透
out of breath 上气不接下气
as a result 结果
三、时间连接词（让作文逻辑满分）
Last… / One day…First…While…All of a sudden…Then…By the time…When…Finally…As a result…
1. 开头（交代时间 + 天气 + 起因）
Last Friday, I had a terrible day because of a heavy rainstorm.
One day, the weather was so bad that I had a very unusual experience.
Last week, it rained heavily and my day didn’t go well.
2. 正文（按时间顺序写经过）
First, my alarm clock didn’t go off, so I woke up late.
I was reviewing my notes while I was waiting for the bus.
All of a sudden, it began to pour heavily.
The wind was so strong that I couldn’t open my umbrella.
By the time the bus came, I was cold and wet.
When I got to school, I was out of breath.
3. 结尾（结果 + 感受）
As a result, the teacher canceled the test. I was so lucky!
It was an unlucky but interesting day for me.
From this experience, I learned to get up early and check the weather.
一般过去时（讲主要事件）
woke up, rushed, rained, went, was
过去进行时（讲背景 / 正在做的事）
was waiting, was reviewing, was walking
套句：
I was waiting for the bus when it began to rain.
我正在等车，这时突然下雨了。
1. 开头
时间 + 天气 + 糟糕开端
Last Sunday, it rained heavily. I had a very bad day.
2. 正文
按时间顺序 + 连接词 + 动作 + 感受
First, … While I was …, suddenly … Then … By the time …
3. 结尾
结果 + 心情 + 收获
As a result, … I felt … I learned that …
Last Friday, I had a terrible day because of a rainstorm.
First, my alarm clock didn’t go off, so I woke up late. I rushed to the bus stop right away. While I was waiting for the bus, it began to pour heavily. All of a sudden, the wind blew strongly and I was all wet.
By the time I got to school, I was out of breath. As a result, my teacher canceled the test.
It was an unlucky day, but I was so lucky at last!
When life rains on our plans, it may bring us a better result.
Bad weather can’t stop me from keeping a good mood.
I learned that I should get everything ready earlier.
新人教版八下 Unit 5 考场满分作文（3 篇・80–100 词）
主题：A terrible weather day 一次糟糕的天气经历
适配时态：一般过去时 + 过去进行时
作文一（课本原版情节・最稳妥）
Last Friday, I had a terrible day because of a heavy rainstorm.
First, my alarm clock didn’t go off, so I woke up late. I rushed to the bus stop quickly. While I was waiting for the bus, I was reviewing my notes. All of a sudden, it began to pour. The wind was so strong that I couldn’t use my umbrella.
By the time I got to school, I was cold and wet. As a result, the teacher canceled the test.
It was an unlucky day, but I was really lucky at last!
作文二（上学遇暴雨・最通用）
Last Monday, it rained heavily when I went to school.
I was walking to the bus stop when it started to rain hard. I didn’t take an umbrella, so I tried to run home. But it rained more and more heavily. When I waited for the bus, I was all wet.
By the time I arrived at school, the class had already started. I was out of breath and felt terrible.
From this lesson, I know I should prepare for bad weather earlier.
作文三（放学遇大风・最简单好背）
Last Tuesday afternoon, I had a terrible experience in strong wind.
When school was over, the wind blew strongly. I was riding my bike home when the wind knocked my umbrella away. I felt scared and nervous.
Finally, I got home safely, but my clothes were wet and dirty.
Although the weather was terrible, I learned to keep calm when I meet sudden bad weather.
配套加分亮点（写在作文里直接提分）
逻辑连接词：first, while, all of a sudden, then, by the time, finally, as a result
时态搭配：was/were doing … when … did …
高级短语：out of breath, cold and wet, go off, rush to