当前位置:终极作文 -> 终极作文

MyEatingHabits

上传:赵金研(七年级.10班)      上传日期:2026年03月25日      学生评价:2星      状态:正常

My Eating Habits

Hello everyone. My name is Lili. I’m glad to share my eating habits with all of you.

I really love eating hamburgers, but I don’t eat them very often because I know they are not healthy. Instead, I usually choose healthy food, such as cabbage, carrots and beef. These foods are rich in nutrition and good for my body. This is one of my good eating habits.

However, I also have some bad habits. For example, I often eat only one meal a day in order to lose weight, and I don’t drink enough water. I know these habits are harmful to my health.

So I want make a plan for example I will eat three meals on time every day and drink more water. I believe these good habits will keep me healthy
  • 七年级.10班:赵栩浩  评价:2星    2026-03-26 10:54:06

    对比清晰:用  However  明确区分好习惯和坏习惯,建议具体可行。 内容完整,结构规范:分段清晰(好习惯→坏习惯→总结),字数控制在80-100。

  • 七年级.10班:高星雨  评价:1星    2026-03-26 10:53:00

    可以加上改进的措施

  • 七年级.10班:何淼  评价:1星    2026-03-25 18:49:24

  • 七年级.10班: 李一言  评价:2星    2026-03-25 18:47:09

  • 七年级.10班:周蓓  评价:2星    2026-03-25 18:47:07

    (^v^)

    • 七年级.10班:赵金研    2026-03-26 10:57:41

      ( ˘ ³˘)❤

  • 七年级.10班:赵金研  评价:5星    2026-03-25 18:46:02

  • 七年级.10班:敦梦涵  评价:2星    2026-03-25 18:45:34

  • 七年级.10班:师君玮  评价:4星    2026-03-25 18:44:34

  • 七年级.10班:蒲一帆  评价:4星    2026-03-25 18:40:24

  • 七年级.10班:高星雨  评价:2星    2026-03-25 14:44:25

    写的不错