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上传:赵金研(七年级.10班) 上传日期:2026年03月25日 学生评价:2星 状态:正常
My Eating Habits
Hello everyone. My name is Lili. I’m glad to share my eating habits with all of you.
I really love eating hamburgers, but I don’t eat them very often because I know they are not healthy. Instead, I usually choose healthy food, such as cabbage, carrots and beef. These foods are rich in nutrition and good for my body. This is one of my good eating habits.
However, I also have some bad habits. For example, I often eat only one meal a day in order to lose weight, and I don’t drink enough water. I know these habits are harmful to my health.
So I want make a plan for example I will eat three meals on time every day and drink more water. I believe these good habits will keep me healthy
七年级.10班:赵栩浩 评价:2星 2026-03-26 10:54:06
对比清晰:用 However 明确区分好习惯和坏习惯,建议具体可行。
内容完整,结构规范:分段清晰(好习惯→坏习惯→总结),字数控制在80-100。
七年级.10班:高星雨 评价:1星 2026-03-26 10:53:00
可以加上改进的措施
七年级.10班:何淼 评价:1星 2026-03-25 18:49:24
七年级.10班: 李一言 评价:2星 2026-03-25 18:47:09
七年级.10班:周蓓 评价:2星 2026-03-25 18:47:07
(^v^)
七年级.10班:赵金研 评价:5星 2026-03-25 18:46:02
七年级.10班:敦梦涵 评价:2星 2026-03-25 18:45:34
七年级.10班:师君玮 评价:4星 2026-03-25 18:44:34
七年级.10班:蒲一帆 评价:4星 2026-03-25 18:40:24
七年级.10班:高星雨 评价:2星 2026-03-25 14:44:25
写的不错